I often start my poem in a depressing way then increasingly make it more cheerful. That's a common thing I subconsciously do ever since I started writing poems years ago. It's as if no matter what grief I go through, I know deep down things will get better. I saw this pattern in this poem as well.
"I will rip those bloody, torn, frail wings from myself,
and I will sew myself a pair of magnificent wings."
Beautiful. It reminds me of not giving up despite the odds. You will fall but rise again. Resurgence. Failing, learning and trying. All the best on your journey.
beautiful, life is a series of getting your wings torn and sewing new ones for yourself!
This comment is so touching, thank you so much!
this one truly touched me. all i can say is: go sew yourself those magnificent wings. you deserve it.🧡
Thank you for those encouraging words.
Wow! This imagery is stunning!!
Aww, thank you so much! Your feedback is really valuable to me.
a deeply felt poem, thank you so much for sharing. let's grow new wings, that are even stronger and bigger than before!
Thank you so much for your amazing feedback! It makes me happy that you felt it so deeply.
This is incredible. I feel like our poems have a lot in common ^^
Wow, that means a lot! What do you think our poems have in common?
I often start my poem in a depressing way then increasingly make it more cheerful. That's a common thing I subconsciously do ever since I started writing poems years ago. It's as if no matter what grief I go through, I know deep down things will get better. I saw this pattern in this poem as well.
Thank you for noticing that. I never thought about it in that way, but you're absolutely right. It's a journey from darkness to light.
Precisely, and poems like these are needed. I'd love to see more poems from you, you're talented ^^
My apologies for the late response, I was out eating dinner. Thank you so much for the compliment, it truly means a lot!
"I will rip those bloody, torn, frail wings from myself,
and I will sew myself a pair of magnificent wings."
Beautiful. It reminds me of not giving up despite the odds. You will fall but rise again. Resurgence. Failing, learning and trying. All the best on your journey.
Thank you so much. Your words are a beautiful reflection of the message I wanted to convey. I really appreciate your insight.
Simply beautiful ❤️🩹
Thank you so much! That means a lot.
Thank you, that's very kind of you.